Forgive Me O, Friend Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Forgive Me O, Friend
Forgive me o, my dearest friend
For pushing you to the corner or dead end
You were taken to smoking
And then to hashish and smacking
What kind of harm did me to you?
You were to pass all ordeals through
Was it intentional on my part?
Or was a just thought with wrong start?
I must blame my self first
As your parent had put enough of trust
That I shall help him till the last
I took him to deep and dark valley very fast
Was it an ignorance or fine show?
We wanted to be with time and grow
We never knew its ill effects
Just followed bad ways with acts
Not that alone I should be blamed for what has happened
The controversy had already taken place and sharpened
There was talk of the two and we were singled out
Shamed all along as there was nothing more to talk about
When it became know to us we acted very intelligently
We did not loose nerves and reacted very gently
We started to come out of its ill effects
Left everything coolly and preferred not to react
It worked well with strong support from all over
Parent too were sympathetic and provided cover
We did earnestly what ever we could to avoid bad show
The dirt of the river was removed so as to facilitate smooth flow
There has to be cross and double checks on movement
When child enters youth and waits for sweet moment
If he gets good company and proper environment
Everything can run smoothly and there may not be any room to resent
Charlie S thanks so much..interesting and well worth the time to read
The comparisons are bold and vivid like you were taken to smoking. The tao, the climax; the first quatrain is captivating; the outcome in the last lines woven complete. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed day! / Wow! you have lots of poems, Sir. Congratulations!
: ~) Mrs. HoltLess than a minute ago I love this poem, great job Comment 0 great work!
Migdalia Burgoin3 minutes ago so many of life's problems come from how we are raised and our environment. Comment 0 As usual beautifully done.
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Riley Barker12 minutes ago You're able to really form the sentences into whatever you want them to be by how great you use the words. sounds good with great content. Comment 0 Comment on Riley Barker's review
Every bad way has an ill outcome. If a child has the proper environment and indulge good company, he has a better chance at life, and can learn the meaning of true forgiveness and love. Thanks.
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Forgive me o, my dearest friend For pushing you to the corner or dead end You were taken to smoking And then to hashish and smacking