Forsaken Poem by Simone Harriman

Forsaken

Rating: 5.0


How could the stars betray me?
To orchestrate love this way
A cruel cupid caper?
How can I ever mend
My heavy earthbound heart?

In the Land of the Long White Cloud
My vessel drifts uncharted
My soul slipstreams blindly
Has the abyss a silver lining?

I can barely breathe
I can barely breathe

Monday, October 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow this is one of your very best, so appealing, soulful and creative musing indeed. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2020

Yikes! ! ! " To orchestrate love this way" What " way" , i wonder? ? I guess NOT a good way. : ( this is food for thought! bri :) I'll read another.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 October 2020

I can barely breathe I can barely breathe //awesome expressive

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Kostas Lagos 19 October 2020

A wonderful poem for the broken hearts

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