Four Lines ~ On Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Four Lines ~ On Love

Rating: 5.0


Love doesn't come in cute packages, it just happens~
There is no guarantee or warranty attached to it,
Nor you weigh it against gains or losses.
The heart opens up and falls, just a free fall.

Friday, May 21, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Fantastic four liner Poem, dear Asim ji....The heart really opens up.....top poem with top stars

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Poetic Sky 22 May 2021

excellent: Love doesn't come in cute packages, it just happens~ There is no guarantee or warranty attached to it,

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Ricky Magnathen 27 May 2021

Superb! What else can one say.

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Deepak S S 25 May 2021

Good enough 4 lines

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Zumas Millamo 22 May 2021

Excellent: Love doesn't come in cute packages, it just happens~ There is no guarantee or warranty attached to it, Nor you weigh it against gains or losses. The heart opens up and falls, just a free fall.

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Varsha M 22 May 2021

Sir this is beautiful portrayal of love. Excellent piece.

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Shreya Hacks 22 May 2021

Yes a very cute love, .

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