Frail Suicide Hour Before Dawn Poem by shannon wright

Frail Suicide Hour Before Dawn

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I try to keep our memory vague
on the chance that I’ll find better days.
how can something so resplendent
spoil everything that comes after?
what once made me so happy
now leaves me cold and numb
in the frail suicide hour before dawn.
1-3-08
by shannon flanders

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Klimenova 09 January 2008

Poetry is a sponge that absorbs pain. Thrives on it. And cures. By taking it away from you. Warmly, Julia.

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Kitti Manson 07 January 2008

Been there done that, and I know that doesn't help but it's true. I like the title, it oiled my brain gears lol.

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William Jackson 03 January 2008

I like your poem's intensity, but do hope you will bounce back. Find a new love if you must but never allow sorrow to consume you.

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shannon wright

shannon wright

stuttgart, germany
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