Freedom Poem by Cheyenne Watkins

Freedom

Rating: 4.5


I feel so liberated.
I feel amazingly free.
The weight has been lifted
From my aching shoulders.
I can breathe!
This is fantastic, incredible,
This feeling I’m experiencing.
My heart is light,
My head is clear,
You finally know how I feel.
I feel the world is my oyster,
And you are my precious pearl.
I love being so care-free,
If only for a minute,
A moment,
One split second,
Before worry and fear
Crash back down around me.
I feel like I’m on top of the world.
I feel like I’m floating on a cloud.
Maybe this feeling will stay awhile,
Maybe it’ll disappear by tomorrow.
So I’m going to enjoy it while I still can.
Who knows when I’ll feel this way again?
But for now, the world is my oyster.
And you are my precious pearl.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caroline Weeks 05 September 2008

Beautiful! Freedom is one of my favorite things to write about...it has a nice rhythm and I love the last line: 'and you are my precious pearl.' Great work!

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 August 2008

I gave this a 9 because it was a pleasure to read. From beginning to the end it was a perfect joy. The words even had a kind of rhythm within. That is most rare. I well deserved 9. GW62

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Russel Choudhury 31 July 2008

Brilliant love the sentiment, so true.

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