Fresh Fish Poem by ray Schreiber

Fresh Fish

Rating: 5.0


On a perfect sunny day
through the open door
of a Chinese fish market
the eye of a sturgeon
seems to meet mine
as one more steak is cut
from its still living body

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Ray I enjoyed reading this one keep it up

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Lillian Thomas 30 October 2009

stark image, well penned. It takes a good observer and an original mind to make a poem from a fish carcass. Thanks for sharing, Ray

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Maria Barbara Korynt 29 October 2009

Very good. I like it. Interesting write really. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

very nice to be the first to comment here!

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ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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