From Virginity Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

From Virginity

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It was simple miss in mind
Always remembered you as very kind
Never heard in life like you as female lover
So far yet heart beats were heard very near

No one may give such pleasure
As you gave me for very sure
I was like wild flower from jungle
Always missed for someone and struggled

You made me to feel about another world
It was so nice to have become part of your fold
The thought of being with you turned me cold
The immeasurable happiness was never told

I have felt your music in ears
It was full of agony to fear
We have decided to give it a finest try
It was really nice attempt to fly

I used to loose nerve
When you tried with magnificent eyes to observe
You had almost captured me as prisoner
Simple human but with luckiest man as lover

I have dreamed many a times
With you, as very much near, sometimes
I need not count missed beats
When you come near and greet

I may be thinking to rob you from virginity
That has been granted to you by divinity
I shall still hold you in tight embrace
To bring ever lasting shine on face

I personally assume it as real love
People may not praise me yet believe
I need to feel every inch of you as lover
As I have the right to smell you when emerge out from shower

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

It was simple miss in mind Always remembered you as very kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

very good Martha GettleLess than a minute ago painted well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

welcome maricel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Shraddha The Poetess 01 February 2014

very nice sir................beautiful rhyming scheme........... and i also invite u to read my new one....which i wrote just a min. ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

awesome hemu guptaLess than a minute ago sir Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

the last two lines Guilty PleasureLess than a minute ago are greatness on their own and the poem is good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

Nice krishna MiddelaLess than a minute ago Nice Comment 0

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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