hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 54,246 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Full Circle - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

First quarter may go in childhood
For playing and learning in neighborhood
School may add new friends
World may not have it end

So first quarter may go in sleep
To make friendship and keep
Move in style and show the movement
Youth is in full form and its presence is felt

Second quarter is full of romance
Hunt for wife is on at once
It is nobody’s time
Love, pleasure and happiness all the times

Third quarter is full fledged family
Children, wife and parents have full fledged entity
Time passes on with their care
You are finding safe shelter

You should be lucky enough
To stay in fourth quarter and laugh
If you find yourself in good health
The pleasure will be felt with wealth

Still you may feel for lost time
It may pinch and upset you sometimes
Well past is gone and nothing can be done
Life may have its destiny to end soon


Comments about Full Circle by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    Sana Shahid Very nice lines....thank you! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    raj malik very nice n true pen picture of life (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    22 hours ago « Delete » Juan José I feel Young forever (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    catherine lajul I feel all the stages now. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 9:46:00 PM)

    17 hours ago « Delete » Preeti Sabhar.. Third quarter is full fledged family Children, wife and parents have full fledged entity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 9:46:00 PM)

    17 hours ago « Delete » Preeti Sabhar.. Third quarter is full fledged family Children, wife and parents have full fledged entity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2013 1:17:00 AM)

    A nice, yet simple poem about life.


    Jason King32 minutes ago
    Good work, man. It was a solid poem. Definitely accurate, but that being said, that accuracy made it somehow predictable. I knew what was coming second verse.
    Comment 1 Comment+1

    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    that t shows my success in having intimacy with your mind
    +1
    Full Circle (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2013 1:16:00 AM)

    Nancy Fillip33 minutes ago
    some good lines thanks for sharing
    Nancy (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    First quarter may go in childhood
    For playing and learning in neighborhood (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013


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