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hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 18,891 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Fully promised

“I want to live no more”
So leave me alone therefore
“I wish I have some more peace”
I want to spend rest of the time at ease

Very brilliant and intelligent from the childhood
He was known in entire village including neighborhood
He may take part in all the activities
Show his worth and talent along quality

He stood first in his entire career
He had bright future and had no fear
He wanted to become doctor
And sometimes disclosed as actor

He had dramatic change
That had come along with age
He was young and sensible
We sensed some serious trouble

Why was he harping so much on nothingness?
We could see gloom on his face
He was not to divulge any information
Later on it was learnt that he had set back in relation

We persuaded him to come back in original mood
At home everybody was worried but understood
His point and remained sympathetic
But the event was tragic

He felt it so bad
And so was all the time sad
We had concern for his state
But we were not late

He realized some point in it
Withdrew his isolation and came to greet
We were all worried but now rejoiced
He had forgotten everything now and fully promised

Submitted: Sunday, July 07, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 09, 2013

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