hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 45,281 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Future Strikes - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

All of sudden fortune strikes
The blue sky smiles
Nights become cool
You are declared successful

So many questions emerge
Time for feelings to assuage
Look back at recent happening
Certainly going to be nice evening

It may be personal experience
Everything just happens by chance
You are asked to become companion
For future bond and union

Think not, it just takes place
With nice smile on face
Accept it as good fortune
Play and fall in tune

Yes, such coincidence is rare
We need to act fare
Think less and act more
Look ahead and explore


Comments about Future Strikes by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2014 2:10:00 AM)

    Yes, such coincidence is rare
    We need to act fare
    Think less and act more
    Look ahead and explore (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 10:27:00 AM)

    Shujat Ahmad and Rohani Daud like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:39:00 AM)

    straight to the point and simple


    Vuyokazi Iphendule Yokwe7 minutes ago
    understandable and awesome, so its a great writing indeed
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    good


    Kathleen Hyatt7 minutes ago
    i like the last line a lot (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:22:00 AM)

    All of sudden fortune strikes
    The blue sky smiles (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2014



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