(g) 4 (Biographical) Friends Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(g) 4 (Biographical) Friends

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When I was slipping into the abyss fast and deep
My world was falling apart; my senses frozen and numb
Relationship of long falling apart; suddenly been orphaned
Demons were calling me; Justed wanted to succumb

My arch angels came in flying swooping me up
Heavens had sent them to dry up my tears
Gently fighting my demons and filling my empty cup
Just holding my hand and bringing me cheers

Friends are heaven sent, your warriors indeed
How our lives would be empty and hollow without them
Even amongst billons of swarming people, we would be left to bleed
If you are the blossoming flower, your friends are the stems

Heavenly flowers always spreading their fragrance
Never crush them coz they are the divine rose
The world will be a dry desert; scorched we will wince
They are the rays of sunshine thawing the winter snow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 14 October 2006

You are so right, friends are so needed and we must learn to truly appreciate them A wonderful write, well penned Love duncan X

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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 September 2006

Beautifully written Tranquil and true friends are like heavenly flowers in bloom! perhaps different varities but they are really flowers?

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Diane Violet 11 September 2006

Beautiful poem on friends, Tranquil. I have to agree. Excellent write.

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Ruby Root 11 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Friends indeed are so important to us all. You have all been patient and a great support to me. Take care Excellent warm and honest poem.

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Ruby Root 11 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Friends indeed are so important to us all. You have all been patient and a great support to me. Take care Excellent warm and honest poem.

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