Alexander M. Sirnes

Rookie - 10 Points (March 13th 1990)

Gave You My Heart (Love & Pain Poem) - Poem by Alexander M. Sirnes

I gave you my heart, the essence of my being.
Wanted love, but your disguise, I struggled at seeing.
The lock to my soul, controlled by the key,
My heart, like my trust, you broke right in front of me.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain

Comments about Gave You My Heart (Love & Pain Poem) by Alexander M. Sirnes

  • Gold Star - 16,123 Points Mandolyn ... (8/15/2014 7:54:00 PM)

    it has rhythm and reads smooth.
    (man, what a boring feedback that was)
    i'd make the title more creative - but that is just me.
    sometimes it's good to just say what you want to say
    even if it's been said.

    how about something like i want my heart back. give it
    sorry, i was being totally serious too. i'm jacked up- don't listen to me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014

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