Alexander M. Sirnes

Rookie - 10 Points (March 13th 1990)

Gave You My Heart (Love & Pain Poem) - Poem by Alexander M. Sirnes

I gave you my heart, the essence of my being.
Wanted love, but your disguise, I struggled at seeing.
The lock to my soul, controlled by the key,
My heart, like my trust, you broke right in front of me.


Comments about Gave You My Heart (Love & Pain Poem) by Alexander M. Sirnes

  • Gold Star - 16,088 Points Mandolyn ... (8/15/2014 7:54:00 PM)

    it has rhythm and reads smooth.
    (man, what a boring feedback that was)
    i'd make the title more creative - but that is just me.
    sometimes it's good to just say what you want to say
    even if it's been said.

    how about something like i want my heart back. give it
    ?
    sorry, i was being totally serious too. i'm jacked up- don't listen to me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014



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