Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 243 Points (India)

Get Lost - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Get a new SIM for you almost free of cost
Let the world know that now you are lost

Losing one's self had never been so easy
Every now and then people are going crazy

They are getting lost whenever they're feeling
to get lost for ever before closing any dealing

Choice remains open before you and me too
Why to sit rooted not fleeing but in situ?

Why to lose a chance of getting lost in a maze
If losing is the game Let us join into the craze.




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Comments about Get Lost by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 258 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/23/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    good grievance in poetry, Palas...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/18/2009 11:54:00 PM)

    Why to lose a chance of getting lost in a maze
    If losing is the game Let us join into the craze................

    Why we one should be lost in this maze
    When there are fierce battles to wage......
    One day surely our inner fire would rage
    And the evil would be razed and dazed...................Good Write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anjesh Shekhar (4/17/2009 4:24:00 PM)

    great irony yet true, phone isolate people. great piece of poetry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (4/15/2009 5:52:00 PM)

    There are many opportunities to get lost in this world.
    A very provocative, well written piece. And with more
    than a touch of satire too.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (4/13/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    Getting lost at the cost of a metal piece
    Good description of the cause and loss

    Every piece of comfort is good
    As long as it is kept with
    A licensee... on paper and off paper.

    A grievance for a change.
    Good one. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014


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