hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,941 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Girl For You - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

At an early age, I used to think
About good wife and paint picture with ink
I will draw big eyes with good lashes
Keep in canvass with good smile to finish

"What she will look like"?
No good ideas may strike
Still I will sink deep into thoughts
Sometimes friends and family members caught me too

It went on for many more years
Till I was forced to hear
"Hi, we have found girl for you"
She is nice, kind and beautiful too

My ear drums started beating
My eyes remained open and almost staring
"Oh no, let me see her first" I smiled with joy
I had no control over wishes and left it to enjoy

"When shall we see each other" one beautiful voice was heard on phone
"Any time of your choice but soon" I wanted it to be done
"Alright then, today evening on lake "I was taken by surprise
"She is damn eager too" I promised her to be in time


Comments about Girl For You by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (6/8/2014 6:32:00 PM)

    Such an endearing poem on meeting a new love! Enjoyed reading! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    Premilah Ramnauth Taken by surprise

    LOL
    Am sure you are always composed
    Yesterday at 2: 07am · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    Lena Bassford And years later here we are, she and I, we are a team for Life! ! ! Enjoyable, brought a smile to mine Last lines, ur style! ! ! !
    Yesterday at 5: 59am · Edited · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, Rohani Daud,3 others like this.
    Just now · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    candid and emotive poem.



    partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan
    Jun 07,2014 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Deep


    Michal Cendrowski9 hours ago
    a pre-determined love? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2014 11:14:00 AM)

    At an early age, I used to think
    About good wife and paint picture with ink (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 6, 2014



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