Give Me A Call.......... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Give Me A Call..........

Rating: 5.0


Call me from the far end
I am still waiting for your call
Time passed by, the wind went
birds born and flew,
ants marched past the mountains
from cocoon caterpillar emerged and flew
rain and sunlight greeted rainbow several times
and I am still waiting for your call.

Before I reach the egress of patience
And start to panic with unrest mind
And plan to wander from valley to valley
With emotions swinging up and down
And darkness surrounds with devil's wings
Forcing me to deploy negativism
Come on give me the call......

Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2016

The call of life. Thanks for sharing.

1 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 29 February 2016

Time dilates when anticipation is great

1 0 Reply
Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Romantic poem about the desire to hear your lover. Thank you for this great poem.

1 0 Reply
Darren Jkoeryo 24 July 2020

A philosophical poem where you left the readers to interpret and enjoy.

0 0 Reply
Sonali Ganguly 17 June 2017

really! such is the emotions when we wait for something for too long. well written Sir.

1 0 Reply
Liza Sudina 01 March 2016

it's as you call someone who is far away on the other shore of the sea! nice poem!

1 0 Reply
Aarzoo Mehek 29 February 2016

Life saving call, waiting with every bit of heart...beautiful expression of the wait...... Don't forget to tell us when you receive the call: D What are friends for, to share the joys of life :) 10+++

1 0 Reply
Abhilasha Bhatt 29 February 2016

A call from love....A call for life......Wonderful philosophy........loved it......thank you for this wonderful sharing :)

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success