Gloomy Night Poem by ramesh rai

Gloomy Night

Rating: 5.0


I gaze at the sky
see
the moon and one star
whispering together
all stars have gone into
peeping through the window sky

A pindrop silence
echoing the nature
sad clouds are mounted high

The sky and the earth
are ready to meet together
so all are gloomy tonight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 28 November 2014

You paint the sky with words that come only with wisdom...gloomy silent night a time for reflection...regards

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 December 2013

Echo of silence sounds beautiful. Thank you.

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Yasmin Khan 21 December 2013

You have depicted a beautiful and awe-inspiring scene.

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Yasmin Khan 21 December 2013

You have depicted a beautiful and awe-inspiring scene.

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