ramesh rai

Gold Star - 18,458 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Gloomy Night - Poem by ramesh rai

I gaze at the sky
see
the moon and one star
whispering together
all stars have gone into
peeping through the window sky

A pindrop silence
echoing the nature
sad clouds are mounted high

The sky and the earth
are ready to meet together
so all are gloomy tonight


Comments about Gloomy Night by ramesh rai

  • Silver Star - 4,460 Points Ken E Hall (11/28/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    You paint the sky with words that come only with wisdom...gloomy silent night a time for reflection...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,226 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 2:44:00 AM)

    Echo of silence sounds beautiful. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 973 Points Yasmeen Khan (12/21/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    You have depicted a beautiful and awe-inspiring scene. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 973 Points Yasmeen Khan (12/21/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    You have depicted a beautiful and awe-inspiring scene. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 20, 2013



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