hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 45,281 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Go Up And Down - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Day had ended
Night had befriended
Stars came closer
Moon was ready as poser

Why I felt them real?
What should I do to have deal?
“Allow me to use vastness” I desired
I shook the head and simply admired

Some of the feelings are just personal
It is not unusual
It comes with nature
When one is assertive and very much sure

We know about day and nights
Still we continue to fight
Wait for next day to emerge
Forget about past for an alliance to forge

This is one of the finest qualities
That has been gifted by Almighty
Only common sense must prevail
The sea is vast enough to avail

Sail on rising waves and move
Go up and come down to prove
Yes it is nature we all understand
So we accept what is done or undone at the end

Nothing is permanent here
It may come and move away there
You need not run behind or cry
But attempt doubly and make sure try


Comments about Go Up And Down by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    motivation...............

    PARTHA SARATHI PAUL1 hour ago
    an earnest appeal.................. good.attempts are holy themselves. great. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013


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