Goal Poem by Anastasia Podareva

Goal

Rating: 4.8


When you're young,
The world is full of 'Kings',
Who blinds your eyes,
Covering the scenes.

You try to tolerant with it,
But the search of the meaning,
Holds you so tight,
For no reasons.

Just set a goal,
Full of the enthusiasm,
like a burning sun,
Despite youthful high spirits.
I know, that a long time ago,
You'd still decided to fight,
For no reasons.

But after all,
The one you've been fighting against
Was yourself...
Can you & me change ourselves,
By denying the 'Law and Chaos'?

Just like the sun,
Can never be embedded
in the moonlight,
For whatever reasons...

Goal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 18 December 2022

Agree with Unnikrishnan.

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Beautiful paintings, in colours as well as in words. Enjoyed. Top score

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 November 2022

Excellent piece TFS

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David Wood 22 November 2022

Lovely poem, you've right, set a goal and take yr time and with love be slow to anger. Top marks.

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