as i stand under the rain
asking god to forgive me from the sin
asking god with an eye full of tears
please god forgive today
i felt that i wasnt crying alone
but they sky was crying with me today
asking god to forgive us today
as i bury my self under the pain
but today am crying so loud
please god forgive me from the sin
Very good poem. But you need to be careful about the spelling and punctuation. But the poem is an excellent one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very nice and wonderful poem....Keep writing.....Gaurav