Treasure Island

Monk E. Biz

(Timeless / Right Now, Right Here)

God's Vision of US

Show me bad and I'll show you
a drop of goodness hiding.

Show my rotten and I'll
show you strong character.

Show me sorrow and I'll
paint for you a better tomorrow.

Show me cold and I'll enlighten a path to warmth.

Show me anger and I'll show you passion in there
and perhaps a redirection.

Show me too fat and I'll show you amazing curves and power.

Show me loud and I'll show you proud.

Show me blood and I'll show you life.

Show me bitter and I'll show you victim-hood non-serving,
followed by freedom then happiness.

Show me disaster and I'll show you opportunity.

Show me broken and I'll see repaired

Show me your life's verse, I'll not be too terse.

Show me and I'll reflect God's vision of thee!

Submitted: Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Edited: Monday, April 21, 2014

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  • Neela Nath (3/18/2014 9:44:00 AM)

    Show me and I'll reflect God's vision of thee - - - - - - - -striking verse! (Report) Reply

  • Colleen Courtney (3/18/2014 8:42:00 AM)

    Show me bad and I'll show you a drop of goodness hiding. How truly spectacular that line is! What a way to start off a great piece of work! Love this! (Report) Reply

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