~~woman~ Man's Greatest Gift! Worship Her! Poem by Chuy Amante

~~woman~ Man's Greatest Gift! Worship Her!

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You have been loved, but WORSHIPED I'm doubtful,
Kindness extended, and nice words just a mouthful?

Many have felt love, in the head or in their pants,
But have you had love, that was a perpetual God dance?

Worship is a strong word, today kind of rare,
An old word, sounds lofty, and full of hot air?

I'm here on Earth,
as a god I do stand!
Here to re-educate women
and especially man!

Behold!

Woman was made to be held up, toward heaven above,
to be valued and polished, as fine gold- pure love!

ALL of her thoughts, her movements, her actions,
ALL miraculously perfect, angelic attractions!

Her thoughts and her words, channeled from Source,
Her ideas, feelings, gestures, perfectly on course!

Her heart is the Avatar we need to gently uncover,
Not nice meat, but GOD expressed as Holy Mother!

She's not a human animal to be caught and then slaughtered,
She IS PERFECT, DIVINE, GOD'S FAVORITE DAUGHTER!

So dear man beast, where does that put you and your feelings?
Chasing female animals on the range, or at her altar kneeling?

If you only could SEE her godliness and true grace,
You'd come home from the range, repent and embrace!

Throw down flower petals in her holy path,
never direct toward her, your nasty wrath.

Bow at her feet, her life is a living altar divine,
give into feminine wiles, leave your realm of swine.

Make her bed, fold her clothes, wash her dishes,
give and keep giving into all of her wishes!

Think not that you have to carry her along,
for service to God can only be celestial song!

Long will your days be, and full of her grace,
Her ways will change you, behold her soft face!

Her love will conquer you, unite nations and more,
Unfathomable bliss, impossible not to love and adore!

Worshiping women will always pay thee well,
Making life on Earth a perfect Heaven not hell!

Go! Buy her chocolates, earrings and clothes,
bask is God's grandest gift, it is YOU she chose!

~~woman~ Man's Greatest Gift! Worship Her!
Friday, March 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love,womanhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If I am the last man standing, I will worship THE Divine
Femininity beyond my last breath, I swear it to God.(Goddess)
Blessed I AM, to have this pure vision.
Womankind, I LOVE YOU! I WORSHIP YOU
I THANK YOU and I LISTEN TO YOU! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 01 February 2016

An amazing point of view coming from a man, totally love knowing there are real men out there, although very few I imagine! You are of the same fabric as another poet, Amitava Sur, my dear friend, he feels the same way as you do and writes it into his poetry here on ph. Never have I heard such praise and worship from a man, didn't have a clue until first reading Amitava's poems. Now yours! ! Like I told him, you need to come to the U.S. and teach American men how to love and appreciate women! Ha Ha! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Why American? All men are the same. As a man from India, I can vouchsafe the Indian men are no different

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Raymond Farrell 15 January 2016

My wife passed away in 2003 and I am now 61 and alone, and the words you have written in this poem strike a chord with me and I deeply appreciate the sentiment and truth you have expressed in this poem. Thank you for sharing it.

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Spock The Vegan 27 September 2016

If you only could SEE her godliness and true grace, You'd come home from the range, repent and embrace! Great words, oh imperfect one. :)

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Kim Barney 12 December 2016

Well done, my friend. This is great. Woman is indeed man's greatest gift and helpmeet. I have just written a new poem about my wife but haven't posted it yet. I am looking for a certain picture to post with it. Congrats on poem of the day!

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3) " Her thoughts and her words, channeled from Source, Her ideas, feelings, gestures, perfectly on course! "… the Source!

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2) the near-perfect rhyme scheme exemplifies the beauty of the poem.

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"… bask in God's grandest gift, it is YOU she chose! "… lovely lines.. a perfect ode to womanhood, the entire women communities.. loved it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2020

Her heart is the Avatar we need to gently uncover, Not nice meat, but GOD expressed as Holy Mother! She's not a human animal to be caught and then slaughtered, She IS PERFECT, DIVINE, GOD'S FAVORITE DAUGHTER! ...... touching expression with outstanding conceptualization. Women are our mothers like They should be properly behaved. A beautiful poem on womanhood has been astutely and incisively delineated. Five stars.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2020

I'm here on Earth, as a god I do stand! Here to re-educate women and especially man! Worshiping the divine feminity. tony

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