Treasure Island

Monk E. Biz

(Timeless / Right Now, Right Here)

~~~WOMAN, man's greatest gift! Worship HER!

You have been loved, but WORSHIPED I'm doubtful,
Kindness extended, and nice words just a mouthful?

Many have felt love, in the head or in their pants,
But have you had love, that was a perpetual God dance?

Worship is a strong word, today kind of rare,
An old word, sounds lofty, and full of hot air?

I'm here on Earth, as a god I do stand!
Here to re-educate women and especially man!


Woman was made to be held up, toward heaven above,
to be valued and polished, as fine gold- pure love!

ALL of her thoughts, her movements, her actions,
ALL miraculously perfect, angelic attractions!

Her thoughts and her words, channeled from Source,
Her ideas, feelings, gestures, perfectly on course!

Her heart is the Avatar we need to gently uncover,
Not nice meat, but GOD expressed as Holy Mother!

She's not a human animal to be caught and then slaughtered,

So dear man beast, where does that put you and your feelings?
Chasing female animals on the range, or at her altar kneeling?

If you only could SEE her godliness and true grace,
You'd come home from the range, repent and embrace!

Throw down flower petals in her holy path,
never direct toward her, your nasty wrath.

Bow at her feet, her life is a living altar divine,
give into feminine wiles, leave your realm of swine.

Make her bed, fold her clothes, wash her dishes,
give and keep giving into all of her wishes!

Think not that you have to carry her along,
for service to God can only be celestial song!

Long will your days be, and full of her grace,
Her ways will change you, behold her soft face!

Her love will conquer you, unite nations and more,
Unfathomable bliss, impossible not to love and adore!

Worshiping women will always pay thee well,
Making life on Earth a perfect Heaven not hell!

Go! Buy her chocolates, earrings and clothes,
bask is God's grandest gift, it is YOU she chose!

Submitted: Friday, March 21, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, July 02, 2014

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If I am the last man standing, I will worship THE Divine
Femininity till my last breath, I swear it to God.(Goddess)
Blessed I AM, to have this pure vision.

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  • Darlene Walsh (9/13/2014 6:23:00 PM)

    I think that the way most men view women (and many women view men) in the world today is atrocious, someone to use rather than as a gift. It's nice sometimes to hear we are perfect (even though we know we aren't) . It's a lovely poem. I would have liked to see the word respect worked in somehow. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/19/2014 11:49:00 PM)

    The first and foremost relationship of a man was his relationship with a woman. Every woman is beautiful. Naturally anyone describing the charms of women creates a nice work of art. You have also created a work of art. (Report) Reply

  • Erika Wingo (4/3/2014 10:06:00 PM)

    I thank you for this beautiful, magical poem, it's wonderfully written. (Flattery will get you everywhere!) (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (3/25/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    So nice description it touched my heart. Befitting adoration for women..... loved it
    You may read my poem A WOMAN (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (3/21/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    This is so great and powerful, touched my soul so gently.
    You really know how to make a woman feel on top of the
    world! 10 - 10's for this one! You're a truly amazing
    poet. If only every woman could find this adoration from
    the one who claims to love her. I could go on and on, but
    I'll give you a break. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (3/21/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    .......bohemian wrecks if you keep this up, you are going to be a role model....for every poet on poemhunter... (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Feldman (3/21/2014 6:45:00 PM)

    That's telling them Men's how to treat women! All joking aside this is so beautifully written, such a homage to women, ! Any woman that reads this has to be thrilled that such a great Poet has praised her so.
    In the name of the International Women's Rights Movement, we humbly thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (3/21/2014 11:56:00 AM)

    We should respect each other.This a profound poem.The subtlety of thought is arresting my attention! (Report) Reply

  • Colleen Courtney (3/21/2014 11:17:00 AM)

    Oh Bohemian! I think I'm in love! ! ! ! ! ! Bravo to you my darling! A glorious tribute to women everywhere! ! ! !
    Splendid! Fantastic! Sublime! ***big sigh***
    Now I know you're not being facetious right? ? ? : -) (Report) Reply

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