As you struggle to breathe, know that I'm near,
I'd give you my life, you have nothing to fear,
Your hand, so cold, means you're slipping away;
And I'd give up the world if you could just stay.
A nice tribute for your love of a person whose life is slipping away. thankyou
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I've read this excellent poem and am fully impressed. Just four lines, but your poem has touched me deeply. As I understand, you wrote this poem holding hands of a person you love dearly. I do not know if the person responded to your call and 'stayed'. 10/10 for this beautiful poem.