Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Six Poem by G J Salgado

Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Six

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When you thought that you knew that you were there
My fantasy became the reality of what you thought that you were
The place where dreams lived outside my head
Where we'll never have to question death

I used my imperfections and inequalities
And I built an entire new world
Created from my buried destiny
Beyond what humanity could ever give
Death became me so that I could live
My fears became truth but death never came

All of my feelings I put beneath
Feeling the burn of the blood through my teeth
The walls are closing in as I scream
Reaching out for life as I cling
Holding onto you so that I can breathe
Breathe into me so that I can be alive

Breathing into a new world of the planets that I created 
Winning the war against everything that I ever hated
I'm becoming more than a soul
Forgiving everything I no longer needed to know

Destroying the past that changed within me
Burning in the flames to set it free
Everything became an illusion of what it was suppose to be
No future, present, or past to see
Nothing exists other than my dreams

Diamonds were the wings of my soul
My heart glittering, shining like gold
I felt alive and I was a miracle
Everything I dreamed of lives inside of me and it is magical

A soul within the soul within the soul of my ghost
Beautiful angel surrounded in Golden Silver Dust
When you dream, dream a dream within a dream of the most
Of the most beautiful Magical Wanderlust

All things that never once before seen
When I dream a dream within a dream of a dream
I'll only dream a dream within a dream of you
Of Wings, Dreams, and Diamonds Too

Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Six
Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: magic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wings, Dreams, and Diamonds Too
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 02 October 2015

FORGIVING EVERYTHING is a phrase that appears about half way through this Part Six, which was the first one that I read, so I've come full circle. Now, of course, I know the whole of it. The central character claims she is becoming more than a soul, but the extent of her transformation and the nature of her future identity aren't clear. What is clear is the dream-like nature of what has transpired throughout parts 1-5. My conclusion with all the reference to interlocking dreams is that this whole poem is an artist's reverie in which she unleashed her imagination to create a wondrous scenario of human life with its emotional conflicts, defeats, recoveries and reconciliations played out on a cosmic stage which in the end is revealed to be a metaphor for our very human, terrestrial existence. And what a wonderful poem it is! !

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