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Ramiro 2 Burgos

(13/10/1967 / Buenos Aires - ARG)


Shall I love you? / Acaso te amo?
Shure I do / Seguro que sí
Now, forever / Ahora, siempre
For all my life. / Por toda mi vida

Can you hear me? / Puedes escucharme?
Would you mind? / Te importaría?
Is that you don´t need my hart? / Es que no necesitas mi corazón?

So I´ll eat it / Entonces me lo comeré
like an apple / como una manzana
and my love is going down. / y mi amor se va hacia abajo

But I don´t worry / Pero no me preocupo
I should die / seguramente moriré
burning my illusions now. / quemando mis ilusiones ahora

Wanna call you / Quiero llamarte
Are you okey? /Estás bién?
You don´t want to see my face / To no quieres ver mi cara

Just a minute / Sólo un minuto
Listening you voice / escuchando tu voz
yielling me: well what you want? ! / gritandome: Que querés? !

It´s no maddness / No es una locura
neither love / tampoco amor
it is magic here and now / es magia aquí y ahora

Door is closed / La puerta está cerrada
hate´s so cold / el odio es tan frío
but you still beating in my heart / pero tú sigues latiendo en mi corazón

Need to see you / Necesito verte
No, I can´t / No, no puedo
Better forget your blue eyes / Mejor olvidarme de tus ojos azules
Good luck. / Buena suerte

Submitted: Sunday, September 26, 2010

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