I figured it out
I know what i've done
I said i hated you
and now its me whose shunned
Please understand
I don't, at all
When i said that
my mind was awall
I've said sorry
and im trying here
i love you guys
I need you here
I can't blame you
only me
I let my depression
get the best of me
I hurt your feeling
I understand
Maybe in time
We can make amends
11-29-09
very well written again..sounds like a closing to the first goodbye...a final request....loved it thanks again.. ~^..^
The great thing I have learned about true friendship is that one will except the others short combings and move on. A friend told me once 'Feel what the f*ck you have to feel and then lets be friends again.' I learned a lot from that one sentence. Keep writing about what you feel and let others work out their own feelings.
tiffany things happen and if it gets the better of you not your fault stay and write 10
Hi Tiffany - Don't worry Angel we all forgive you because we all love you. Always nice to say sorry for that i give you a TEN. Keep writing and keep reading all of our Poems. Often we guys say really really lovely things about the PH Ladies - you are all awesome. Love you in poetry - JOHN
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nope stop don't dropp you will get up now look into my poetry I deleted them too now stand back Ice i glisten has a brand new bag of vision call me your optimist optometrist- with a dash of a pen you might heal yourself again