Goodbye Poem by kristine manuel

Goodbye



you know that I love you
you know that I cared
but you didn't recognize it
and you just put it in vain.........

maybe Im just so stupid
that's why you left me behind
but then I realized
it was not my lost anymore.........

again I said,
'hi! , '
but you only said,
'goodbye! .'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 29 March 2006

you know that I love you you kno that I cared but you didn't recognize it and your efforts is good, try more

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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 March 2006

fine attempt. keep going.

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