When will you see
It's not up to you and me
and life's not perfect
It was never meant to be
The key is finding peace within
and you might not be able to find it in him
Or in her, but for sure
Someone as beautiful as you
Can pull through
Just realize it's true
and keep walking down the road
We both know and grow old
Then winter comes, and it's cold
but if you keep walking
You wont shiver no more
I promise...
I agree about the symbolism! I love the image of not shivering on the journey through winter... beautiful stuff! All the best Bob
There is just so much symbolism in your work, and I love that. You should really get in touch with the SYMBOLISTS POETS of the 1800s to inspire you some more.
I enjoyed this very much, a sense of sweetness and promise throughout. Lilly :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is lovely! It totally gave me the shivers (and that's a good thing) 'Nother good one! ! :)