Grace Poem by Forrest Hamer

Grace

Rating: 3.3


This air is flooded with her. I am a boy again, and my mother
and I lie on wet grass, laughing. She startles, turns to
marigolds at my side, saying beautiful, and I can see the red
there is in them.

When she would fall into her thoughts, we'd look for what
distracted her from us.

My mother's gone again as suddenly as ever and, seven months
after the funeral, I go dancing. I am becoming grateful.
Breathing, thinking, marigolds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 March 2012

Grace is a boon indeed/nice way to pay tribute/I love your ideas...carry on....up to the.....

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Carolyn Binkley 31 March 2014

This poem tells a beautiful, yet moving story. So much is expressed and revealed in so few words. Beautifully told.

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Brian Jani 29 May 2014

Nice work forrest

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* Sunprincess * 31 May 2014

..............I feel you will always think of your mother, when you see marigolds....beautiful poem..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 May 2019

My mother's gone again as suddenly as ever and, seven months after the funeral, I go dancing. I am becoming grateful. Breathing, thinking, marigolds....nice poetic expression.Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for chosen as MPOTD.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 May 2019

Profound write about mother, motherly love and the spell it throws on an infant and it's life. Well deserving modern poem of the Dal

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Kevin Patrick 30 May 2019

A tear of sadness swells reading this, but also hope, the loss of a parent is one of the hardest things to face, and Hamers words resonate completely, but with loss comes a lifetime of memories and souvenirs. Wonderful.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 May 2019

One of the best poems by Forrest Hamer..................

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 May 2019

A nice poem to read and reflect. Thanks for sharing.

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Alouwou Mandjah 30 May 2019

Thumbs up Forrest Hamer.

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