Grandmum's Invitation Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Grandmum's Invitation

Rating: 4.5


Grandmum's Invitation

Dear Vinhie, come to granny,
let us in the garden play,
today is a pleasant snowy day

Grandma shall bake you cookies sweet
when you come let us first have a relaxed seat

Grandma bakes
a delicious apple cake
you get a slice most greatest
the weather outside is coldest
near the hearth it's warmest

chocolate drink for you so mildest
never drink when it's hottest

we have great luck Vinhie sweet
the weather has thick snow as its treat

Grandma helps you with the snowman
we will make as many as we can!

See you soonest!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The homemade apple-cake is from goudrenette, a special kind of Dutch apples, a bit sour and bit sweet, the cake tastes always very delicious, but seldom looks excellent, but that is because all ingredients are fresh onesYummy-yummy, dutch applecake Thank you so much for reading and enjoying the applecake
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 21 January 2021

This is really beautiful poem. Grandma and grandchildren share special niche. Time spent with grandparents always are most cherished....and your apple cake most tasty. And your cookies awaiting all are alluring.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

A lovely poem with mention of exotic snow, and delicious cake, sweetly inviting grandchild to play. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow awesome poem, one of your very best indeed, snowfall is exotic for mwow this is a lovely poem with exotic snow and delicious apple cake and sweetly invites grandchild to play with granny. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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