Gratitude In Solitude Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Gratitude In Solitude

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these solitary tears
have always been
dear to me

I hear voice
from afar
angelic

lark at heaven's gate shines
and God shall strengthen
all the feeble knees

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Sonya Florentino)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 14 May 2009

a nice poem...brief but full of meaning...those solitary tears could touch our lives dear...naizz

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Sonya Florentino 14 May 2009

Dear Ahmad, I can't express how touched I am by this dedication...beautiful poem and not only because you wrote it for me... truly beautiful.....

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Subroto Chatterjee 14 May 2009

Nice of you to give company to solitary tears. Strongheart...Nice lines Cheers. Subroto

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A beautiful spiritual poem to a wonderful lady poet. It gives hope for brighter tomorrows and the power and love of God to be with us always. 10 Karin Anderson

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 15 May 2009

Dear Mr Siddiqui, I liked this poem of gratitude because it attains the zenith when you say that you hear an angelic voice in the form of a 'lark at heaven's gate shines/and God shall strengthen /all the feeble knees' SHORT AND SWEET POEM WITH DEDICATION AND CONNOTATION OF GREAT VALUE. Thanks for sharing A-10-Rajkumar

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

GODS voice and strength are always near.

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Barry A. Lanier 17 May 2009

hearing voices from 'afar' a creative allegory of soltitude...

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Aldo Kraas 17 May 2009

Thanks for sharing your poem.

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

An inspirational poem Ahmed dedicated to a very talented poet as well.10

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Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

most of your poems are dedicate to greatest poets that is good work dear poet

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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