Growing Still Poem by Adam Bateman

Growing Still



Hello to the hell of life,
hello mother...use that knife.
Cut the cord to the past,
help hate...to always last.
Beat forward with desire,
fuel flame...to passions fire.
Now that all has fallen short,
remain alone...without cohort.
why try when it will fail,
runaway train...soon derail.
Continue on without hope,
slip back...down unending slope.

Goodbye future now is time,
goodbye father...cowards crime.
Never thought it would last,
genetic finger...from the past.
Pointing always to the seed,
forever growing...evil weed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sydney Daniels 09 May 2006

Expressive hate without pounding words. The pauses give it character. Nice write.

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Goldy Locks 09 May 2006

infested from the seed. good, passionate write, Adam- brimmed to the edge with hate- was that what you were going for? i'm not a fan of the....<- dotsdotsdots, i think thats just lame fashion. but keep writing, ill be reading, Sus.

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