Guitar Poem by AmAnDa GoNzAleZ

Guitar

Rating: 4.5


I feel the rush of cold breeze brush
Through my hair
I feel you embrace me so close as the winter
Whistles sweet melodies into my ear
I look into your eyes I try to see who you are
Try to put you together
With the melody of my guitar

But the strings do not merge the way they should
Is it just because our love is
Misunderstood?
I rephrase the song to make you fit
For some reason you nock me down with your fist
I want to make you here my love for you
But It’s not effective because
I have lost you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Shah 28 April 2008

a highly symbolic poem.The strings of guitar are unable to give that sound because love has lost meaning and, therefore, does not sond convincing.A very beautiful poem.

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Marvin Brato 28 April 2008

Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all! Sad but romantic, high marks.

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