When man puts himself
Above God all his efforts
And plans come to nought.
Man must realize his role to bring peace. Thoughtful haiku.
Very true! Only complaint David is that Haiku is 17 syllables 5-7-5- or so I was told?
Found out that Japanese Haiku is 5-7-5- but some poets decided to go against it, and now it's any way you want! But I reckon 5-7-5- is better?
10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD
10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD
10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good and heart touching, thanks.