Haiku #15 Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Haiku #15

Rating: 5.0


a dusk stroll into trees,
I duck wing flaps near my head:
owl asks, 'Who? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 11 June 2009

I liked the unexpected action of this one. Sentry owl asking for the password.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 June 2009

A perfect haiku, Lillian. Keep writing. Regards

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2009

very nice...keep doing it cheers

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Very interesting,10 with love.

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