Haiku - 25 Winter Calls Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 25 Winter Calls

Rating: 5.0


i write with finger
to see the outside world
naked translucent.

Monday, October 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
How similar nature and life are,
both are naked and translucent
during the change over phase.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 25 July 2016

Createed a Nice imagery by this haiku

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 December 2015

Wow wow wow.....Awesome Man

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2015

Winter calls so amazingly in this context shared very nicely. Wise and wonderful haiku shared....10

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Kelly Kurt 26 October 2015

I often used the heat of my hand to write on iced over windows when I was young. The view through the melted scribbles was as you said. Thanks, Mohammed

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Loke Kok Yee 26 October 2015

hot air will also do great haiku-10

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