Haiku - 255 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 255

Rating: 5.0


witnessing their growth
sunflower opens up further
between dawn and dusk

Sunday, November 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: growth,nature walks,sunflower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 05 November 2018

There are many layers of meaning which could we attached to this eloquently written poem. For the moment, I am just enjoying the image of a sunflower.

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2018

Thank u so much, You said it, there are umpteen things between dawn and dusk that grows including our own castle of wishes.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

Sunflower opens face in between dawn and dusk. We really witness beautiful growth. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2018

Thx Much..Sir,

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Pallab Chaudhury 04 November 2018

Eager to see Sun Sunflower opens up; then Turns by day-end. A nice poem about sunflower. Thank you for sharing it. PC

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2018

Thx Much.. and by the way your above haiku is perfect for a sunflower....10 for it.

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