Haiku 255 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 255



the sun beats down
the source to the brink of
it bowing thirsty

Sunday, October 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 25 October 2015

You write nice poems. As such haiku is in syllable 5-7-5, you write even shorter than that with meaning more than the haiku.......Loved it.

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