Haiku 298 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 298



if he took the nest
he promise to love
he rest even then

Thursday, October 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 29 October 2015

Ari, I'd say it's a senryu, not a haiku

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Ari Alsio 29 October 2015

That is not say, but what you want, but a Finnish hyphenation going 5-7-5 OK?

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