Haiku 3 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Haiku 3

Rating: 5.0


mid night at window
half moon shines high above sky
bright against my blues

Monday, May 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,reflections
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 12 May 2017

i think (usually) midnight, but i'm not sure of half moon or halfmoon. or half-moon. computer underlines in red: halfmoon. i might say high in sky. where does sky end and space/outer space begin? ? or i might say high above in sky, but that might be too long. i like this one also. bri :) i like bright/blues alliteration, and the suggestion that the moon might take away 'your' blues. to MyPoemList

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 18 May 2016

A besutiful haiku, moments of reflections...rated 10+

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Savita Tyagi 18 May 2016

Thank you Jesus James for your encouraging comment and rating.

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