May be cage on gold,
It may be new one or old,
It curbs freedom, bold.
Truly, a cage of gold or so, glittering or so, is worthless as freedom is worthfull and everything.
There is indeed so much wisdom and truth here. A trap is a trap, a cage is a cage, no matter how attractive or alluring it may seem. A brilliant work.
Filled with wisdom... three short lines expressing a very big truth. thank you
I remember my university days (In an Indian University) . During election campaign of 1964 Pandit Jawaharlal Nehrue came to Gorakhpur. According to schedule he addressed the students. A barrier was there in between Pandit Ji and the students. Pandit Ji disliked it. He said, I don't know whether I am in a cage or these students are in the cage, remove it. Your poem helped me to recollect that great moment when I saw a true leader.
True words of wisdom. Cage is a cage no matter what it is made of. Thanks for sharing.
A cage is a cage. Glittering, self made or barbed wire, it restricts
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very true........Nicely written Haiku.......10