Haiku - 80 Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 80 Life

Rating: 5.0


flying butterfly
sucks nectar mercilessly
a candle melting

Haiku - 80  Life
Monday, July 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2016

Wonderfully written, Man.10

2 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 12 March 2019

Thx Much D J....................

0 0
Shreya Hacks 09 October 2020

Wow so welll thought

2 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 04 July 2016

What a creative way to put life. Your insight is really deep. I'm really impressed by your perception here.10++++++

2 0 Reply
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 04 July 2016

Candle melts itself and offers to feed the flame that burns up the candle, sans a self gain. The flower offers nectar to a butterfly, for it's own gain. Both these are life events to ponder about. Thanks for sharing.

2 0 Reply
Rob Lamberton 12 March 2024

"Love is like a butterfly" - Dolly Parton

0 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 March 2024

I love the last line Asim Bravo! ! ! !

0 0 Reply

Wow

0 0 Reply
Michael Jack 31 December 2020

Awesome poem 😊

1 0 Reply
Varsha M 29 December 2020

This is beautiful sir.

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success