Haiku - Aching Poem by Asif Baloch

Haiku - Aching

Rating: 3.5


Aching with a deep pain
inside my lonely heart
only my heart knows the
taste of my tears dropped

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rifhan Rasuli 19 September 2008

Um, pardon me for asking, sir. Isn't a haiku supposed to be written in three lines? Regardless, all your haiku poems are well-written.

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