Pierced my heart
Rhymes thus I wrote
Love and loneliness
On the tide of thoughts tho float
Trembling like a leaf
Ready to fall
Falling like this
Never to rise
Floating in the winds
Of sorrows and denials
Thinking with the heart
Brain is froze
Yearns and sighs
Filled in the air
Waving like a blind
For hand to hold
Crying like a child
For motherly love
Forgot the reality
I’m aging old
I never have accomplished
Anything in this life
Thinking like a fool that
He might, put the time on hold
Pleading and crying
Wondering in the mist
I’m the one they call
Miserable, lost soul
He might, put the time on hold great line... and a amazing ending! ! ! ! ! I really like it. good job. Becca
misery of the lost soul brought out very well....a timeless write!
Your lost soul will be taken care of by the Angels of Guardian my friend Asif.What a lovely piece from you bro.
'I’m the one they call Miserable, lost soul ' love it, it was nice to read it...well done...10 Hataw
Great poem my friend as I never such imagery and creativity like this...thank you 10/10
Hey bro u r amazing matured stroke by pen with wonderful contruction.. Regards Yaseen Anwer
Wow, wonderful Aijaz.. Always in sadness... But keep in happy, but what God plans it's never known, This writes, just remembered me of something, Love this one, my dear friends, Wish happy in you, always, Naru Kaede,
What you have acclomplished is a wonderful poem sir...10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderfull writing full of feelings of lost soul