Jack Kerouac (12 March 1922 - 21 October 1969 / Lowell, Massachusetts)
Poems by Jack Kerouac : 12 / 24
Haiku (Birds singing...)
Birds singing
in the dark
—Rainy dawn.
Jack Kerouac
Submitted: Thursday, January 01, 2004
Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011
Read poems about / on: dark, haiku
Poems by Jack Kerouac : 12 / 24
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Anyone who sticks to the 5-7-5 syllable rule knows nothing or is outmoded. Even the haiku of Basho when translated in English ignore the rule. Modern haiku could be 1 or 21 syllables.
A haiku contains 17 syllables in just 3 lines. The first two lines contain 10 syllables(5 each) and the third one contains 7. The poem doesn't meet the criteria of a haiku. Therefore it shouldn't be called a haiku. It may be an expression composed well.
What a beautiful poem in such few words.
Beautiful and sweet Jack Kerouac always digging the gentle poetry of life.
I have never payed attention to birds singing on rainy dawn but now more reason to listen to mother nature
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