Don Haney

Rookie (5-19-1967 / Dallas, Texas)

Haiku - Dawn - Poem by Don Haney

as dawn approaches
the dark sky turns pink then blue
this day God has made

~~Revised~~
~~Better Written~~

dawn approaches
sky turns pink and blue-
I awake


Comments about Haiku - Dawn by Don Haney

  • Gold Star - 14,335 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 3:57:00 PM)

    .........still I love the original, God makes it beautiful....enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (4/29/2014 9:05:00 AM)

    The hope of a newly dawning day! Nice write! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,164 Points Zinnia Narcissa (4/27/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    simple expression of thoughts.Nice write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,335 Points * Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    ...........beautiful imagery...I like the first one the best... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 24, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, April 18, 2011


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