(! !) ~ Haiku; Drizzle Of The Rain ~ Poem by Alice Cuenca

(! !) ~ Haiku; Drizzle Of The Rain ~

Rating: 4.5


fleeting small circles
forming into the puddle ~
drizzle of the rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rory Hudson 24 April 2009

A fine haiku in the best tradition of nature poetry. Especially good considering you are less than a year old: -)

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Indira Renganathan 27 April 2009

May be your poetic age is one year but you sound five years....so cooling in hot summer here

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Rommel Mark Marchan 06 May 2009

i never write haiku but here seems u trigger me to write forcibly great poem

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Rory Hudson 07 May 2009

Nice one, sensitive and effective in the best tradition of haiku.

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Isaiah Grey 09 May 2009

This is very profound on several levels. I can feel the lightness of drizzle as I read it.

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Adeline Foster 10 September 2009

Very good Haiku. Invite you to read mine called RAIN. With a different view. Adeline

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Sandra Martyres 04 July 2009

Lovely haiku on rain...10

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

a nice haiku..beautiful as expressed..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Cute, with rainy love 10++

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Surayya Abbas 20 May 2009

Nice piece.Thanks for sharing

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