Haiku - Life's Footprints Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Life's Footprints

Rating: 4.8


a winter river
frostbite of old memories
no footprints to trace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 02 November 2020

What an imagery and an apt analogy between icy cold season and painful memories subjected to freeze before it could bite. Skillfully crafted. Thanks a lot. .

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Anjandev Roy 03 November 2020

Another remarkable haiku.........thank u, dear poet........anjandev roy.

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2020

a winter river frostbite of old memories no footprints to trace- - So beautiful!

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Deepak S S 02 November 2020

Brilliantly written. Hats off MAN 5****

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Varsha M 02 November 2020

Life's footprint indeed very true. Beautiful.

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T Rajan Evol 08 November 2020

Winter full of memories.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 November 2020

Damages of the past resulting in a great loss, humanity standing still on the road of life, and cyclone of hate has erased the footprints of love. A meaningful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2020

Winter is co-related with frostbite. A meaningful Haiku on a philosophical ground is well executed relating to season. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 November 2020

winter invites the frosts come to expunge stain of heart!

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 November 2020

Sigh! Irony of life. Though reality erases the footprints but the heart sustains the anguish.10****

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