Haiku: Pain Poem by Sandra Feldman

Haiku: Pain

Rating: 5.0


Deepest first Love lost
Sharpest knife, cuts life away,
The World ends that day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 24 January 2022

Great Haiku Sandra. Oh that first love, so long ago!

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Sandra Feldman 24 January 2022

But never forgotten, Can't let go.Thank you, David.

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Sandra Feldman 25 January 2022

And All.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2022

Three powerful lines that express the power of first love. So deeply poignant and touching.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 January 2022

Gorgeous Haiku, such a Beauty! 5 Stas full on Top for this fantastic Haiku.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 January 2022

The world comes to a standstill......marvellous haiku.......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 January 2022

Wow! Dear friend Sandra! So true! How can one ever erase the first love?

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Soran M. H 25 January 2022

This is how true love affected the poet's heart and memory. She is sincere in her words, as if she wants to teach us the true meaning of sincere love. Thank you for all your beautiful poems.

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Ruta Mohapatra 25 January 2022

So true!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2022

Yes, deepest first love can alter life or its meaning. A profound haiku. To my Poem List.

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