Kelvin Owusu

Rookie - 126 Points (15-10-1988 / Ghana)

Haiku (R.I.P)


Heaven calls to her
hell grabs him hung a neck noose
sorrows bloom teary

Fly from here to next
beyond a blissful dreamer
rain dropp butterfly

Cover in dark light blindness
Foresight judgement heaven cry

Submitted: Monday, October 01, 2012
Edited: Monday, October 01, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

this is a challenge set by Ms. Gwen
I based this Haiku on those who have been killed

Comments about this poem (Haiku (R.I.P) by Kelvin Owusu )

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/5/2012 10:13:00 AM)

    brilliant and facinating.
    we and the others who are the victim of such crimes, would praise this great piece of work.
    mucha gracias for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,198 Points Ramesh Rai (10/5/2012 7:59:00 AM)

    RIP. who ever be but it is a great dedication to other to who are the victim of such occurrence. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (10/1/2012 3:55:00 PM)

    i wrote this haiku due to a rape and murder which occurred over a week ago, it was a dedication to other cases such as this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (10/1/2012 12:23:00 PM)

    One is heaven bound, the other is a butterfly in the rain! Both will cause tears to fall? A lot said in your Haiku. Interesting! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/1/2012 9:36:00 AM)

    Cleverly done.......... (Report) Reply

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