Haiku's Kiss (5-7-5) Poem by mohammad ahmadizadeh

Haiku's Kiss (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.8


Flower with three petals
Seventeen times kisses you
Kiss it with comment

Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 11 February 2016

Superb, nice imagery and sensual poem.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 11 February 2016

Thank you very much dear friend.

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 February 2016

Bless the flower with three petals for spreading love and friendship all around. Beautiful Haiku.11413

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 11 February 2016

Thank you Aarzoo.

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Souren Mondal 10 February 2016

A very interesting Haiku.. I loved the way in which you used the technical aspect of a Haiku and turned the technicality into poetry.. Thanks for sharing Mohammad.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 11 February 2016

Thank you dear Souren for reading and your comment.

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